College is a Waste of Time
Thesis-(Paragraph one sentence 3) "I believe higher education is broken."
Evidence-(Paragraph three sentence 2 ) "We think college as a stepping-stone to success rather than a means to gain knowledge.
Evidence-( Paragraph two sentence 3) " College fails us to empower us with the skills necessary to become productive members of today's global entrepreneurial economy."
Evidence-(Paragraph six sentence 4) "We are the disruptive generation creating the "free agent economy" built by entrepreneurs, creatives, consultants, and small businesses"
Refutation-(Paragraph five sentence 1) "Fortunately, there are productive alternative to college."
Concluding Statement-(Last paragraph last 2 sentence) "we who takes our education outside and beyond the classroom understand how actions build a better world. We will change the world regardless of the letters after our names."
The author appeals to the audience by being one of us since he know and experienced college he's like in our shoes giving real life examples and evidence to how it really is as a college student.
Evidence-(Paragraph three sentence 2 ) "We think college as a stepping-stone to success rather than a means to gain knowledge.
Evidence-( Paragraph two sentence 3) " College fails us to empower us with the skills necessary to become productive members of today's global entrepreneurial economy."
Evidence-(Paragraph six sentence 4) "We are the disruptive generation creating the "free agent economy" built by entrepreneurs, creatives, consultants, and small businesses"
Refutation-(Paragraph five sentence 1) "Fortunately, there are productive alternative to college."
Concluding Statement-(Last paragraph last 2 sentence) "we who takes our education outside and beyond the classroom understand how actions build a better world. We will change the world regardless of the letters after our names."
The author appeals to the audience by being one of us since he know and experienced college he's like in our shoes giving real life examples and evidence to how it really is as a college student.
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ReplyDeleteI think the thesis statement she has used is just an opinion by the author. There is more refutation in the article other than the one stated. I agree with the conclusion.
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